I really like the different forms that were created as you repositioned the piece. However, I think your piece can benefit from altering the way in which you attached the different pieces of paper (tape, that’s clearly visible to the viewer) a problem that I also encountered in my construction.
I really like your piece’s slanted vertical element and rounded tail-like feature, especially in Views 1 and 2. They remind me of an animal. However, while I like the idea of your sculpture, being able to see the tape you used to connect different pieces takes me out of the viewing experience. Finding a more creative way to fold edges down rather than taping them together would have definitely helped; alternatively, you could also consider leaving those separate edges visible and unattached to add to the idea of interlocking pieces.
I really like the different forms that were created as you repositioned the piece. However, I think your piece can benefit from altering the way in which you attached the different pieces of paper (tape, that’s clearly visible to the viewer) a problem that I also encountered in my construction.
I really like your piece’s slanted vertical element and rounded tail-like feature, especially in Views 1 and 2. They remind me of an animal. However, while I like the idea of your sculpture, being able to see the tape you used to connect different pieces takes me out of the viewing experience. Finding a more creative way to fold edges down rather than taping them together would have definitely helped; alternatively, you could also consider leaving those separate edges visible and unattached to add to the idea of interlocking pieces.