2 thoughts on “Paper Project Progress”

  1. I really like the sharp lines and overall composition of your piece, it gives off luxurious vibes. However, If you were to improve the project, I think you could benefit from adding another curve (the structure between your two larger triangles ) elsewhere. Possibly underneath the current curve.

  2. I like the forms you used and the connection between different elements- the composition is really strong. It is particularly strong from the side views but from the front and back it’s a little bit too flat and simple. Maybe try to add an element coming towards you in those spots.

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